Editing Pierre (section)

===Appearance===
His limbs were modified and extended and his head looks like an overgrown, balding rabbit head with bulging, weeping, bloodshot eyes.<ref>I watched as what had appeared to be two people turned out to be one augmented person.  Arms and legs had been extended and modified, so that he walked on tiptoes.  His feet were as long as my forearm, the heel and ankle were where my elbow would’ve been in that same analogy.  Lanky didn’t even begin to describe it.His face was what threw me, though.  Not a mask, but surgically altered.  He’d given himself the head of a rabbit, complete with floppy ears.  The hair was a touch sparse, though.  It wasn’t like a drawing of a talking animal in a children’s book, though.  The appearance of an overgrown, balding rabbit head with bulging, weeping, bloodshot eyes and open mouth failing make vaguely human expressions was disconcerting, to say the least. - [https://twigserial.wordpress.com/2016/07/07/dyed-in-the-wool-12-1/ Excerpt] from [[Dyed in the Wool 12.1]]</ref> His modifications gave him a very disconcerting appearance.<ref>“I want to see the rabbit you’re talking about,” she said.  “Who gets very easily offended.  I’m imagining something adorable.”<br><br>I thought of Pierre.  Adorable wasn’t what came to mind.  The head that looked like a badly taxidermied rabbit head, expression that of a rabbit mid-stroke, eyes bugging out, the sheer height of him, and how it all made him an eerie figure…<br><br>“He’s a good friend and an excellent messenger…” I said, trailing off.  I tried to think of a way to put it politely.  Pierre was a friend, but he was a queer one, and I didn’t like to talk poorly of friends, in case it got around to them.  Especially when it came to dealing with more sensitive recruits, who would hear me say something negative about one person and then imagine me saying things about them behind their backs.<br><br>So, how to say that Pierre was a bit disconcerting, without calling him disconcerting?  How did I outright reject the notion that he was ‘cute’? - [https://twigserial.wordpress.com/2016/12/06 Excerpt] from [[Bitter Pill 15.11]]</ref>
This was improved on later, marginally.<ref name="18.4">"We’re doing quite well,” Pierre said. With the abundance of focus on the cosmetic, someone had tended to his head, and he looked far better. Still ghoulish, but better. - [https://twigserial.wordpress.com/2017/04/11 Excerpt] from [[Dog Eat Dog 18.4]]</ref>

Before being discarded all together.